I plan to challenge my year 11 students to a ‘creative reflection a week’ for the next term in a bid to encourage them to develop their written expression. It is only fair that if they have to write one short piece a week, I should have to write one too. I stumbled upon Friday Fictioneers and decided to use the weekly writing prompt as my stimulus for creative expression. Below is my contribution for this week.
Eating my feelings
I sit upon my balcony
My hands rest against the rail
My eyes travel outwards
And flit across the silver shale
Rocks are strewn across the cliff-face like a jigsaw border not complete
They attempt to constrain the grass, but the grass has got them beat
My emotions are the grass; green, feral and out of control
My heart is like the eroding rocks; hard, but tears have taken their toll
I sit upon my balcony
My body framed by the roof
A triangle with steep pitch
Fork in hand
Of my feelings,
The body will be the proof.
Dear Pun,
My father used to say that a pun is the lowest form of pastry. On that note I’m happy to welcome you to Friday Fictioneers. :D. Your verse is captivating and fun.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Nice verse! Thanks, Nan
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Lovely verse.. The metaphors are strong and reflective.
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Welcome to the Fictioneers. I’m glad I made it to your piece before tomorrow, when it all begins again. 🙂 Real life keeps getting in the way!! Nicely done.
janet
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For better or verse welcome to the Fictioneers.
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