Friday Fictioneers #18

28 Oct

It took me ages to come up with an idea for the prompt!  I’m still not convinced that it works.  Let me know what you think!


Images tumble onto my screen daily.  With each ‘like’ my life intertwines with another.

I know you didn’t approve.  But I know of no other way.

When you left there was no wall on which I could type my grief, no timeline which chronicled your existence.

So, I made you one.

Offline, of course.

A series of photographs, arranged in a chronology of your life, now sit on a low wall at your favourite spot.  Each is captioned, dated, and accompanied by commentary written by friends.  Over time, others have added their observations.

If you were here, you’d like it.


2 Responses to “Friday Fictioneers #18”

  1. rochellewisoff October 28, 2014 at 10:44 pm #

    Dear MSC,

    A fitting use of the prompt and a lovely tribute to a loved one.

    I think you mean Each is captioned rather than captained. .

    Nicely done.




  2. Nan Falkner October 29, 2014 at 6:34 am #

    You miss her (him) and I love the “if you were here . . .” line. Looks like you made a shrine in her honor! Love it! Nan 🙂


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